Sometimes it helps to see what not to do. Workshop participants often want examples of great stories but in a perfect world, they would have great and not so great examples of the same thing back to back. Comparisons are much more revealing. Here is a story I stumbled upon. Read the caption version first and then the article. Version A: at the top of the page is the photo version story. There are 10 captions that tell a succinct story.…
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