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January 2017

best practices

How jargon suffocates your stories

Oh, jargon. All dressed up and trying to get invited to every little shindig. That fancy institutional lingo, so cozy in your messaging, sucks the blood out of your stories. Jargon stamps out approachable “story speak” and replaces it with “institution speak” at every turn. Let’s say your organization works in asset building. You could start a story with… Michelle wanted to break the cycle of generational poverty so she began to explore asset building. Jargon attack! No way does Michelle talk that way to herself. Better…

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character selection

Guess who makes a poor protagonist…

Are you allergic to cats? Babies? Do you like stories about ’em anyway?  Then you oughtta know that during a recent webinar, organized by the wonderful organization Washington Nonprofits, I asked the participants to name a protagonist in their stories. Someone started writing about a cool one-eyed cat. I blurted out that animals don’t make great protagonists and kept going. If I had more time to elaborate, I would’ve said… The protagonist and beneficiary are sometimes, but not always, one and the same.   Let’s say…

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Why are you missing in your own story?

How about this year we all commit to owning our awesomeness in our stories? I just read a mediocre story on a respected nonprofit’s site. A story that had so much potential but then skipped the best part. Since I don’t name names, here is a generic sum up: Line 1: In the present. Happy parents hold heir new baby boy. Lines 2 and 3: Flashback: Just a year ago, things looked dire. Short list of unfortunate events explaining why situation is bad. Line 4:  Advocacy Organization “provides…

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